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This fragile year
I rented out your goad of flesh
To hunt  the feeling in my gut.

The month was raw, and vaguely distressed
I burned away a few of your calories
By arguing with freckled skin.

You cast aside these past frail weeks
I screamed in silence
You screamed at the birds
Who aren’t responsible for your negligence.

I found this day
As I swam amongst commercials
I wouldn’t drown in the dark ages
Because unlike you, I can read the chorus.

So in this moment alas I find
I am like my other
Anew, recharged this earthly mother
Duality bathes the perfect symmetry.
©2009 ~MissOmen18
:iconmissomen18:

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I was feeling...my sign.

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:icononlytalkingsense:
This is quite an odd style, and I'm liking it. Very well written.

"This fragile year
I rented out your goad of flesh
To hunt the feeling in my gut.

The month was raw, and vaguely distressed
I burned away a few of your calories
By arguing with freckled skin."

Especially that.
:iconmissomen18:
Thanks so much! Yeah, i'm all about the odd. Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! :)

--
"I was just sipping on something sweet I don't need political process."

-Brandon Flowers/Lou Reed
:icononlytalkingsense:
No problem.
P.S. I love that Killers and Lou Reed collaboration, it's a great song.

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